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Author Topic: Hawkin's Forever Changing Story (I Update as the story goes along)  (Read 692 times)

Offline MrWillyWonnka

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Before I start, this is currently what's happening. FEEDBACKS PLEASE!

Name:Truet
Gender:Male
Life Time Wish: Become an Astronaut

Name:Kristen
Gender:Female
Life Time Wish: Master Painting & Virtuoso

                                                    Part 1: The Terrible Start    It was when two young adults moved into a house together as roommates. They were downright poor.  They started out in a house with only the things that were crucial to them. Toilet, Shower, Fridge, Bed, And themselves for fun, and social. They didn't really know each other so they never really talked in the beginning. All of the rooms were unfinished, dark, and depressing. Out of how poor they were, Kristen was able to buy a guitar, the only thing to make her happy. While she was playing the strings, the boy got his dream job, to join the military! He was finally able to buy a canvas board! Then the girl kept on painting better and better paintings throughout the time. (This was her job for then.) Once the boy got to level 3 in his career, the girl got to get a job too! She joined the virtuoso career even closer to get to her lifetime wish! By now the house was growing nicer, better, and more livable. About when he reached level 6 in his career Kristen and Truet started to bond. They talked, talked, and talked, until the man proposed. The girl agreed, and then they had Packston. By now Truet's lifttime wish already came true.

                                                       Part 2: The Children       Once Packston was born everything changed. The whole house was a master piece! Everything matched and they were wealthy. In fact, they were able to finish the entire downstairs and start on an upstairs where the nursery room was! The girl finished her lifetime wish. Right when Packston became a toddler, another child was born, Kayla! Soon after Packston became a kid, they had to change the house up a bit for him to sleep somewhere, thus the master bedroom was moved upstairs next to the nursery and then created the best room of the house. I created a perfect kids room, for the boy and girl. I added the biggest window in the center and then made the rooms symmetrical, but slightly different colors. During this time Kayla became a kid, she practiced writing until she was level 7 at writing! But then Packston grew up and so did Kayla! By now Packston was a teen, and Kayla was too! Not to mention Kristen was at her max in her career.

                                                       Part 3: Young AdultSchool was done, for both Kayla, and Packston. Kayla began her dream job, journalism! In between this madness, Kayla found her true love, Bradford the firefighter. Eventually they got married but shortly after Bradford died of drowning, thus his gravestone was placed in our yard so he may be free and wonder around the world as a ghost, R.I.P. He died because he was tired while swimming (Which wasn't the best idea) so then he drowned. Before he died, he got Kayla pregnant with Lawson! Kayla had Lawson born and everything went good, I used the age transaction cheat, he became the perfect gardener and earned a job at the science facility. Then Packston met his true love, Amelia Vu, a magician. Then shortly got married then had a child, the house was terribly crowded so Packston's love moved to a new house.

                                                        Part 4: What now?Now that Packston's love left the house, he got a job, an athlete! Kayla was level 8 in her career, then just like that Packston got to level 5 in his job.

To be continued
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Offline Pam

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Re: Hawkin's Forever Changing Story (I Update as the story goes along)
« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2009, 09:23:59 PM »
Welcome to the Forum, Wonnka! 

I'm curious about exactly how the firefighter drowned.  Would you mind sharing the details?
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Offline MrWillyWonnka

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Re: Hawkin's Forever Changing Story (I Update as the story goes along)
« Reply #2 on: November 16, 2009, 08:16:52 PM »
Oh sorry, of course I will add that right away!


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Re: Hawkin's Forever Changing Story (I Update as the story goes along)
« Reply #3 on: November 27, 2009, 05:44:39 PM »
Is this a legacy?  Are you going to pick an heir?  I like your story, it's moving along quite nicely.  :D  Was very sad that Bradford died so soon  :o, poor Kayla she must be heartbroken  :'(.  I'm sure you have something planned for her, hmm interesting.  ;D  Is Packston going to be moving to join his true love?? ???  Any pic's?  Sorry so many questions...but nice job on the story.  ;D

Offline Da Vinci

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Re: Hawkin's Forever Changing Story (I Update as the story goes along)
« Reply #4 on: November 29, 2009, 09:26:02 PM »
This is just like a soap opra! please, anyone who thinks they can make a good story do so!
"This is my maiden voyage. My first speech since I was the president of the United States and I couldn't think of a better place to give it than Calgary, Canada." --George W. Bush, as reported by the Associated Press, Calgary, Canada, March 17, 2009

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Re: Hawkin's Forever Changing Story (I Update as the story goes along)
« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2010, 08:28:38 PM »
my name is kayla
that got me really excited!