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Offline Isys

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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #50 on: January 14, 2011, 05:11:02 PM »
Part 7

It was not my intention for Shauna and I to be this close, before I knew it we were dating. She had a weird sense of humour and loved to be anywhere but inside. I found myself at times letting my guard down but I couldn't afford to do that not fully. Sometimes when we were together I noticed that she was a little distant, I would ask her what's on her mind but she would just put on a smile and change the subject just like my mother would do.



One night she asked me a question, she asked what if one day she was gone or I found out that we could never be together. I wasn't sure if there was a right answer to that question so I asked her if there was something she wanted to tell me. She told me she had to take a trip somewhere, she would be gone a week and would call me when she returned. I tried to ask where she was going but she just said it was a business matter she had been putting off.

The next day found me back at my place, I logged on to my computer and downloaded the information I got from Omni. There were several references to a Mika Mone that dated back to well before I was even born or thought of. That was impossible, they must be ancestors, there were no known photos of her and every man that was involved had mysteriously vanished. Ok there must be a good explanation, this information can't be right. This time I was more determined to get to the truth no matter the cost, for several nights I woke up in a cold sweat because of dreams of her doing the strangest thing to me. To even say it out loud is just ridiculous, sometimes Shauna would be looking at me when I woke she always had a concerned look on her face but never asked me what my dreams were about.

 I drove around the city hoping that I would have happen to run into her, it was while I was making a left turn I noticed that someone was following me. A few rights and a left confirmed my suspicions and it was now a high speed chase.



 Knocking over several mailboxes and nearly running over several people I took the chase to the bridge heading out of town.


 
This guy was persistent, I could tell that this was going to get ugly fast, distracted I didn't notice the pot hole in the road and swerved my car hit the rail and sent me flying onto the cement. Stricken with pain I struggled to get myself together before my assailant got to me, sweat dripping down my face I struggled to get up.



The car stopped just a few feet away from me, I stood ground as best as I could ready for what was about to come next, but what happened was not what I expected.

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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #51 on: January 14, 2011, 05:18:18 PM »
Part 8

It was Mika Mone! I couldn't believe it, why I started running I don't know but I had to get off the main road. She chased me with incredible speed for a girl as I struggled to get my legs moving, I stumbled down a hill onto a grassy field I quickly got up to find her standing in front of me.

 Don't make me do this!” I was confused what have I done and how does she keep finding me? I could see in her eyes she was conflicted I tried to talk her down but she wasn't listening, soon it was like she wasn't even there anymore" I'm sorry" before I could even evaluate what she was sorry for she attacked me.



It was now a battle a battle to the end one of us was not going to make it. I was sure I would have been able to take her down but she had unusual strength. I was taught never to hit a girl but she was making this hard to follow, instead I tried defensive strikes rather than ones that would hurt.



But she did not do me that favour, each attack was one of lover who has been hurt. Did I know her, why so much fury, I tried to run but she cornered me with more strikes, my eyes burned I couldn't see.






 I am not sure what happened but I could swear she bit me but  before I could look the fire that followed knocked me out,  soon it was dark soon there was nothing.




 "I'm sorry, but you have to stop this, it's the only way don't you see he will find you kill you. If you only knew I wish I could tell you, the truth and also (pause) the future, your child's future".

Fin
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #52 on: January 14, 2011, 05:25:39 PM »
Yes it is cruel to end the story there but it is the end, I have to work on well the major part of the story I am playing. If you are curious enough I'll post pictures after I start the next part of my story.

I hope you enjoyed reading and feel free to leave your comments or requests for an update as to what happened to Mika or Exodus. I'll be happy to fill you in.
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #53 on: January 14, 2011, 06:45:51 PM »
Oh, wow! What an amazing story! I do have a couple questions, though.
1. At what point did the story's PoV change?
2. Did Exodus know Mika and Shawna were the same person?
3. What traits did the characters have in game?
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #54 on: January 14, 2011, 07:18:55 PM »
Awesome update!! I can't wait to read more :)

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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #55 on: January 14, 2011, 10:08:31 PM »
Uhm... Isys said that was the end.
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #56 on: January 14, 2011, 11:00:25 PM »
Oh, wow! What an amazing story! I do have a couple questions, though.
1. At what point did the story's PoV change?
2. Did Exodus know Mika and Shawna were the same person?
3. What traits did the characters have in game?

The end of Mika's story was when she was at the vampire's club and he told her the story about how she came to be, then Exodus's story started.

No he did not know they were the same person, you know what they say keep your friends close and your enemies closer.

Mika's traits were, flirty, great kisser, perceptive, perfectionist, hopeless romantic
Shawna's were, family oriented, good sense of humour, charismatic, natural cook, genius
Exodus's were, hot headed, perceptive, athletic, charismatic, brave


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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #57 on: January 14, 2011, 11:03:43 PM »
Awesome update!! I can't wait to read more :)


Lol thanks, the story does go on in my game play I won't have anymore posted stories about that story because there is a bigger story I am trying to break out so I have to work on it. Then i'll post what happened in order to start the other part of my master plan.
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #58 on: January 16, 2011, 11:54:06 AM »
Exciting news, as you all know the ending of the story implied that Exodus will be a father, well Shauna aka Mika is pregnant! I'm so excited now the story can begin.

It will be called Trying To Be Shauna Neat. It will be on it's own post so a whole new story and I will explain what happened after the fight. Hope you continue to read on, see you on the next post.

ETA: Monday or Tuesday.
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #59 on: January 16, 2011, 02:31:30 PM »
Yayz! I can't wait!
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #60 on: January 24, 2011, 06:23:15 PM »
Once again I wanted to say you are a great writer, I am reading all your stories!

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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #61 on: January 24, 2011, 06:58:27 PM »
I have just read this. Amazing.  :)
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Re: Double Trouble
« Reply #62 on: January 24, 2011, 07:13:42 PM »
Thanks for keeping the story alive, I always welcome new readers enjoy and I hope to read some of your work as well. We got to support our fellow simmers!
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