Author Topic: The Mitzráyim Dynasty- Ch. 19: Birthday Surprise (Read 3484 times)

kattiq · « **on:** December 18, 2011, 10:08:59 PM »

The Mitzráyim Dynasty

Table Of Contents
Khalid
Away From Home
Secret Handshake & a Wedding
A Baby Story
Growing Pains
It's My Life!
Ahela Ukhti
Happily Ever After
Death & Life Situations
Day to Day
My Son
The Mummy
Soulpeace
Safe Side
Ana Baħibbik
Eloped
Positive
My Little Girl
Birthday Surprise

The Immortals

Aria Mitzráyim
Career: Science
Lifetime Wish: Culinary Librarian
Super Skill: Cooking
3 Lifetime Rewards: Food Replicator, Discount Diner, Complimentary Entertainment
6 BlackOps: Memorable Meals, Bugerlicious, Outstanding Tasting Ingredients, Absolutely Great Produce, Bring Back the Jams, Cooking Tips
6 Best Friends: Gracie Loveland, Kenji Midden, Christopher Mitzráyim, Benjamin Mitzráyim, Ebony Mitzráyim, Zena Mitzráyim
Property & Building: Cinnamon Falls, Daris Teeter Grocery & the Koffi Cafe
Portraits: Young Adult, Adult, Elder

Christopher Mitzráyim
Career: Sculptor
Lifetime Wish: Swimming in Cash
Super Skill: Sculpting
3 Lifetime Rewards: Collection Helper, No Bills Ever, Food Replicator
6 BlackOps: Sculpture for a Friend, Sim on Ice, Oh Scrap, Personal Sculpture, An Old Ruse, Frequent Fatique
6 Best Friends: Dominique Mitzráyim
Property & Building: Adventure Landing, Rustler's Den
Portraits: Toddler, Child, Teen, Young Adult, Adult

Donovan Mitzráyim
Career: Professional Sports
Lifetime Wish: Physical Perfection
Super Skill: Athletic
3 Lifetime Rewards: Jetsetter, Prepared Traveler, Learned Relic Hunter
6 BlackOps: First, Second, and Third Relic, Sports Competition
6 Best Friends:
Property & Building: Pump It Up Pony Training Grounds, Donovan M. Art Theater
Portraits: Toddler, Child, Teen, Young Adult

Sophie Mitzráyim
Career:
Lifetime Wish:
Super Skill:
3 Lifetime Rewards:
6 BlackOps:
6 Best Friends:
Property & Building:
Portraits: Toddler, Child

kattiq · « **Reply #1 on:** December 18, 2011, 11:04:21 PM »

Chapter 1: Khalid

As I looked up into the clear blue sky, I daydreamed about my life back home. The days when my family was all together in our small town of Al Jawli, Egypt just eating swarmas and listening to my crazy grandmother tell us about her meetings with all the Pharaohs. But it's all over now, my family is gone and I'm by myself. Here's how it all happened..

One night I was asleep next to my sister Isis, when we heard a loud crashing sound and screaming outside the house. My sister and I peered out the window, and people being dragged away into the night. I immediately crept out of my bedroom to make sure everyone else was okay. When I got out into the hallway, I noticed the front door was left open, and my mother's favorite vase was shattered across the floor. I hopped over the shards of the vase and ran into my parents room only to find them gone. My father had always told me that if I ever felt in danger to uncover the trap door underneath my grandmother's old rug. So, I grabbed my sister, found the rug and jumped inside.
The next morning, I awoke to someone trying to open the hatch to our hideout. My heart began to pound, I grabbed my sister and pushed father away from the door. As the hatch broke open, a large man climbed down into the hole. I let out a sigh of relieve when I saw it was my Uncle coming to rescue us.

Several years later, I returned to my old home. I had remembered hearing my dad tell me one time that if anything happened to him, I was to go and dig up some special papers he had hidden away beneath the dirt floors. You see, my dad was a well-known archeologist who studied the hieroglyphics within the many tombs scattered across Egypt. He had told me he had stumbled across something called "Khalid" or "Immortal". I didn't know it back then but the men who took my father and mother were looking for that manuscript. I decided to take my chances and see if his findings were still in the house.
As I dug through the dirt at the spot my dad told me to look, I came across a small chest filled with papers. And at the bottom of the chest there was a small compartment containing the coveted documents. When I read the words "Khalid", I knew right then that my parents had died to protect this flimsy piece of parchment, that's why they never came looking for my sister and I. My eyes began to fill with tears.

When the tears subsided, I read through the manuscript. I can see now why my parents had to do what they did. If this had ever gotten into the wrong hands the whole would be in complete chaos."Khalid"not only told you of the ancient immortals but also how they became one.
I pored over the script for hours and learned about all the challenges these "immortals" had to face. That is when I decided in honor of my Father and Mother, I was going to begin my journey to immortality.

Gogowars329 · « **Reply #2 on:** December 18, 2011, 11:30:55 PM »

This is looking interesting Kattiq! I'll be reading through this one! I hope you can complete it.

kattiq · « **Reply #3 on:** December 19, 2011, 12:05:37 AM »

Ch 2: Away From Home

I had the information I needed. But I needed to make sure I was far away from anyone else that could still be looking for these manuscripts.

So, I hopped on a plane and began my travels to a town tucked within the southern valleys of Sim Country called Appaloosa Plains. When I landed I was greeted with green grass (there isn't really in Egypt) and the smell of horse manure.

I began to walk towards the middle of town to figure out if there was any piece of land available for me to purchase. I walked into the first building I came across to see if anyone knew what I needed.

Man: " Yello, missy how can I help you?"
Aria: " Um, yes can you tell me where I can purchase land around here?"
Man: " So yer new in town say? Well we gots a piece of land right down yonder. Lemme walk ya over there. Then we can go to the town hall and get ya set up if ya like it"
Aria: " Okay, Thank you sir.. I really appr---..."
Man: " Don't ya worry your little head about it darlin'. It's my pleasuree"

I had a hard time trying to understand his thick accent but I think I got the gist of it. So, I followed him down the road a bit and came to a beautiful stretch of land nestled at the base of a valley near the beach. It was so beautiful, I had never seen such an array of earthy colors in my life. I immediately told the man I was ready to buy.
He took me to the town hall where I purchased the land, and then he took me back to his shop to help me pick out some things I needed to set up.

Later that evening...
When I had all my things put together, I decided to walk back into town and begin fulfilling my first task as a potential immortal.

I walked into what seemed to be a hair shop and met a few people. There was however, one man that caught my eye.

Aria: " Hi, I'm Aria.."
Benjamin: " Why hello, names Benjamin. Are you new in town?"
Aria: " Y-yes. I am. It's nice to meet you though. What can you tell me about this place?"

We talked for several minutes and then he invited me to dinner. The food here was quite different from what I was use too, but Benjamin helped me pick the food that was most similar to what I was used too. He was so kind to me, and he helped me understand how this town worked. After our conversations, I felt like I had known him my whole life. It had been a very long time since I had felt this special. After dinner, he walked me home..and then we parted ways with a promise to contact each other the next afternoon.

I laid in bed that night excited about the new events that had happened to me previously. I couldn't help but dream about what could become of my new friendship with Benjamin.

The Next Day

I was up before sunrise the next day. My sleeping schedule definitely was off due to jet lag so I spent some more time exploring. I found several special seeds I would need for later as well as a new pet.

Meet Charles the Scarlet King Snake. He's pretty cool.

When I arrived home, I found Benjamin waiting outside..

Aria: " Oh my, I'm so sorry I kept you waiting! I guess I had lost track of time while I was exploring."
Benjamin: " No worries sweetie. I've only been waiting my whole life to meet someone like you.."
(feel free to giggle at how cheesy that pickup line was.)

Without another word I pulled him close and kissed him.

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dulcea · « **Reply #4 on:** December 19, 2011, 12:48:54 AM »

I enjoy reading this legacy, I wish you good luck with your immortal dynasty!

loveSims · « **Reply #5 on:** December 19, 2011, 10:03:24 AM »

I'm glad you started a new dynasty! Awesome story

kattiq · « **Reply #6 on:** December 19, 2011, 10:08:46 AM »

Thanks everyone! I am actually having a lot more fun playing and writing up this story than the last one! I've been researching Egyptian history just so I can input little things here and there. Their ancient culture is so fascinating to me!

Katluvr · « **Reply #7 on:** December 19, 2011, 10:15:27 AM »

Great story so far! Benjamin is quite the hottie - glad Aria snagged him before he turned vampire (at least in my version of AP he's a vamp). I'm looking forward to reading more!

kattiq · « **Reply #8 on:** December 19, 2011, 04:37:36 PM »

Quote from: Katluvr on December 19, 2011, 10:15:27 AM

Great story so far! Benjamin is quite the hottie - glad Aria snagged him before he turned vampire (at least in my version of AP he's a vamp). I'm looking forward to reading more!

Thanks Debbie! He is a hottie

I did however get his tattoos removed because some were super tacky! Haha. Yeah Gracie Loveland and a ton of others turned into vampires instead though.

Lilygirl · « **Reply #9 on:** December 19, 2011, 06:25:48 PM »

A new Dyansty! Good luck with this one Kattiq, I look forward to reading it.

Esther1981 · « **Reply #10 on:** December 19, 2011, 07:26:34 PM »

Awesome start Kattiq! Good luck with this one!

kattiq · « **Reply #11 on:** December 19, 2011, 09:46:50 PM »

Ch. 3 Secret Handshake & a Wedding

I decided.. Maybe it was time I tell Benjamin about my plans. I wasn't sure how he would react because I didn't want him to think I was just using him to make cute babies and paint portraits. Which I mean he IS a total babe, but it can't hurt right?

Right after lunch, I brought him to a little secluded spot and pulled out the Kahlid. But before I read it to him, I had him promise to not tell anyone. He gave me a confused look at first, but when I told him that he would be apart of something that could change his life forever he seemed to be more interested. So, I told him we had to complete a secret handshake to seal the deal first and then I'd open up the manuscript.

(I just thought it was funny they looked like they were about to do a weird handshake so I thought I'd add it in)

Benjamin was very keen on learning more about this "immortal" challenge and was more than willing to help me out. He told me that even if he had to spend tireless hours painting, it was all worth it to have to stare at my face while doing it. Which I thought was a little creepy..but I guess if that's what will get him through it then so be it!

The next day he asked me to marry him and that evening we had our wedding

(please ignore the horse butt..I guess he wasn't too impressed)

Turns out the guests weren't as impressed with our wedding but Benjamin and I sure did have a great time later that night

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kattiq · « **Reply #12 on:** December 19, 2011, 10:02:02 PM »

Ch. 4: A Baby Story

The next morning, I had gotten up to go to the bathroom when I came back I found Ralston (Benjamin's German Shepard) laying on my side of the bed waiting for Ben to get up. It was the cutest thing I had ever seen!

As I was standing there, I immediately felt sick. I raced back into the bathroom.

My grandmother had always told me that women who experience a sudden urge to vomit after a night of woohoo.. Are probably pregnant.

Well the facts lined up in my case, and I ran down to the local quickie mart and grabbed a pregnancy test. And sure enough, I was pregnant! I couldn't believe it! If only my parents were here to see me now. I know they would be proud. After the shock subsided, I went back out into the kitchen only to find Benjamin enjoying a nice plate of waffles.

Benjamin: " Hey baby.. What are you grinning about so early in the morning?"
Aria: " Well.. I hope you don't mind.. but we're going to be parents!"
Benjamin: " Wait.. What?? You're kidding right?"
I stepped back kind of hurt at his skepticism..
Aria: "Would you rather I was?"
Benjamin: " No no, sweetie I'm sorry.. I didn't mean it that way..I really am excited! I promise, I should have never said that..I'm so thrilled to share a child with you Aria. I promise to be the best father to him or her once they are born. I was just shocked it happened so early. But please believe me when I say I am so happy right now my face could pop. "
Aria: " Well let's hope you keep your face for a little while longer. I want our kid to know what you look like.. Haha"

The days of my pregnancy flew by and before I knew it my belly was as big as a watermelon!
Benjamin had read some pregnancy books and saw where it was really helpful in the baby's development to be talked too, especially by the father. So, every chance he got he would place his hand on my belly and have a full on conversation with ~~the baby~~ himself.

One night after one of his conversations I felt an increase of pain in my abdomen. I immediately knew I was in labor.
Needless to say, Ben freaked out but I knew that the best place to have this baby was in my own home.

At 11:45pm, Christopher Khalid Mitzráyim was born.

The moment I saw him, I fell in love all over again.

Benjamin was the most excited I had ever seen him to finally get to hold his baby boy. It was so sweet to see them two together. I could tell Christopher was going to idol his father when he grows up.

Oh and in other news...We got a new puppy awhile back. I just had so much going on I forgot to show you a picture.
Here's Ebony right as she was about to grow into an adult!

And here is a picture of Ralston and Ebony (as an adult) playing. The size difference between the two is crazy!

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dulcea · « **Reply #13 on:** December 20, 2011, 01:07:16 AM »

Wow, hehe so much happeneds! Grats on the marriage, puppy, and ofc the biggest grats on the start of generation two!

kattiq · « **Reply #14 on:** December 20, 2011, 01:34:17 AM »

Quote from: dulcea on December 20, 2011, 01:07:16 AM

Wow, hehe so much happeneds! Grats on the marriage, puppy, and ofc the biggest grats on the start of generation two!

Yeah I'm actually way ahead in the game than in the story and when I get a chance I try to catch up as much as possible! I'll tell you one thing though. Christopher is a real cutie!

loveSims · « **Reply #15 on:** December 20, 2011, 08:28:05 AM »

Congrats with the wedding and the nooboo! Great update

ratchie · « **Reply #16 on:** December 20, 2011, 08:31:18 AM »

Great story I am really enjoying it. By the way when I click on your chapter links they don't take me to the relevant chapter I just end up at the top of the page.

Rachel

kattiq · « **Reply #17 on:** December 20, 2011, 09:58:32 AM »

Thanks Lovesims!

Quote from: ratchie on December 20, 2011, 08:31:18 AM

Great story I am really enjoying it. By the way when I click on your chapter links they don't take me to the relevant chapter I just end up at the top of the page.

Rachel

Oh goodness, thanks for the heads up rachel! I totally forgot to adjust the links. They should be all fixed now

ratchie · « **Reply #18 on:** December 20, 2011, 10:35:23 AM »

They work fine now.

Rachel

Katluvr · « **Reply #19 on:** December 20, 2011, 11:48:38 AM »

I love the picture of Aria holding Christopher - it's so sweet! Congratulations on the wedding, the nooboo, and the puppy - awesome, just awesome!

kattiq · « **Reply #20 on:** December 21, 2011, 12:52:32 AM »

Quote from: Katluvr on December 20, 2011, 11:48:38 AM

I love the picture of Aria holding Christopher - it's so sweet! Congratulations on the wedding, the nooboo, and the puppy - awesome, just awesome!

Thank you! I loved that picture too. I'm glad I caught it in time

kattiq · « **Reply #21 on:** December 22, 2011, 11:07:15 PM »

Chapter 5: Growing Pains

Wow, where do I start? I have been so busy trying to make sure that Christopher was growing up just right and between getting him ready and myself ready for immortality I haven't shown you guys the latest events in my life!
Well, Christopher finally grew into a toddler. I can already tell he is going to look JUST like his father.

Ben and I had the hardest time trying to teach Chris all his vital life skills because all Chris wanted to do was play with his darn friend named "Cuddles!" But after some coaxing we finally managed to teach him most everything.

And then it was finally time for my Adult birthday. I'm still not too keen on the face lines I got instantly.. But at least I'm prettier than most of my friends. Okay, that was a joke..But you know what I mean right?

Then! Chris finally grew into a child!

(Sorry for his funky exterior, I failed to get another picture of when his body adjusted because I was laughing too much at his facial expression to his daddy)

Christopher did well in school and managed to get all A's!
I on the other hand have managed to complete almost everything to achieve immortal status except for making it to level 10 in my career and having 6 best friends (I have 4 right now though).
Benjamin has just been painting away mostly and teaching Chris how to do it as well.

WOO! Christopher grows up again to Teen!

Chris finally also managed to reach portrait ability in painting so he could help his father out.
Turns out he's a lot better than Benjamin, but Benjamin is okay with that. He's just glad his son loves the same things he does.

Christopher also met a little lady at school named Dominique Beckham. She's sweet, I'm just not sure I want my son being so distracted just yet.

I know this update is full of pictures of what is going on with Christopher..And believe me if he knew how many pictures there were of him he'd be thoroughly embarrassed. But I think I'm going to ask him if he wants to write the next chapter anyways because I need to go make more best friends!

With that I leave you.

P.S. Just asked Chris. He said he would! I'm so relieved.

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Sorry for that jumpy update guys! I had all this stuff to show you but I mean I couldn't really add a story line to it because nothing great happened except birthdays. I'm sure you ALL know what I mean. Haha
And also I don't know why but the last picture did not show it was re-sized on here for some reason even though I definitely re-sized it.

loveSims · « **Reply #22 on:** December 23, 2011, 03:50:00 AM »

The pic where Chris aged up to a child is so funny! He is a cute teen will be a very cute young adult! Awesome update

Katluvr · « **Reply #23 on:** December 23, 2011, 12:49:48 PM »

Chris is so handsome! He's got Aria's eyes and the rest seems to be Ben - what a great mix! Dominique is very pretty - I hope she doesn't distract Chris too much.

kattiq · « **Reply #24 on:** December 23, 2011, 01:05:56 PM »

Chapter 6: It's My Life!

Okay people, Chris here. Mom made me write this so I'm going to try to make it interesting but no promises okay?

Ugh, mom is reading over my shoulder and said I needed to have an "attitude adjustment" and to be nicer.

Also, mom wanted me to tell you all that Dad has aged up to elder. (you'd think she just needs to write this..But whatever)
Anyways, He gives a us a whole new meaning to "~~Old Fart~~"..Eerr Lovely father

Now back to MY story.

Usually when I get home from school, I try and get my homework out of the way so I can go hang out with friends.
This night however, it took me a little while longer to get finished. Here's Why:

I seriously just wanted to vomit. My parents can be a "aggressive" with their PDA sometimes. I guess they forgot I was sitting right there. And mom told me I couldn't have Dominique over a lot because she would distract me.. pfft.

Thankfully, my night got a little better when Dominique came over. I know my mom already told you but yes, I do like her.. And I plan on telling her tonight too.

WOO! I got a girlfriend I got a giiiirrrrlllfffrrriiieenddd! Okay sorry about that. But I think I might love her!

Later that night after Mom made Dominique go home something sad happened..

Remember Ralston, my dad's dog?
Well she passed away..I feel so bad for my dad, he wouldn't get out of bed for days.

Happiness finally came back to my family when my birthday came around!

And then I graduated from High school with honors and valedictorian! I was also voted "The one who would most likely complete their Lifetime Wish"

I also asked Dominique to move in with me.. And she said yes! Little did I know how muscular my "potential" bride-to-be was.

Look at those guns! I guess this is my queue to begin working out. Peace out!

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Thanks Lovesims & Katluvr! He definitely has a good combination of both his parents! thankfully Chris got through High school fairly easily

Oh and if you guys haven't noticed I am now going to start using Ben for Benjamin, Chris for Christopher and I'm working on a shortened name for Dominique. So if you had an idea about one let me know! I'm thinking Mini but I'm not sure if that would confuse people or not..It's just a pain to have to type all those names out!