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Offline Gogowars329

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Finding Out About the Fire
« on: January 09, 2012, 11:36:11 PM »
Finding Out About the Fire
Is the sequel to the Tenderlove Legacy which is the sequel to the Tenderlove DecaDynasty. Hope you enjoy.
Chapters List
Part 1:

Chapter 1: The Fire
Chapter 2:A New Beginning


Chapter 1: The Fire
We were all waiting for Lunch. Sierra had just put the food into the oven.

We heard screaming. It was only a few minutes ago we last saw Sammi and she was fast asleep. I was off to go see what was wrong. Turns out, she just woke up but I saw something odd, a gap in the wall.

Then I smelled smoke. I ran to the kitchen and I saw a massive fire covering the kitchen doorway. Sierra and Chantrelle were trapped. Calvin had ran to get help but with all the tension (and him being a coward) he fainted outside the door.

I hear Gogo:
‘Error! Cor... grab Sam... and... to the... boatdock. Head...Barnacle...’
Gogo just stopped. I ran to grab Sammi out of her crib and noticed a laptop on the floor. It looked like it fell off the roof. I picked it up and the screen was covered in a bright red ERROR!
I put it away and grabbed Sammi and ran.

I saw Ditz looking around Calvin and called him. He started following me. I ran down to the pier as fast as I could.

The Guard at the first boat was shouting:
‘All aboard! The one escape from Lionheart for any pets and people here! Leaving in 1 minute.’
I only just got on before the boat set sail. I watched as there were more flames coming from other houses and I saw that the pool had been fenced in with people in it. Whoever did this must be horrible.
I looked at Ditz and he was covered in fur balls.
“Fur Balls?: I thought, “There are no cats on our street and Ditz can’t produce them.”
I looked down at the laptop I grabbed in was broken. There as a claw scratch on the back. I needed to fix this laptop so hopefully, I could hear Gogo again.

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #1 on: January 09, 2012, 11:42:57 PM »
I'm sad to see the Tenderlove's legacy end but I'm excited to see more about Sammi! Great introduction :)

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #2 on: January 10, 2012, 01:39:05 AM »
I'm glad you start a story with Sammi! Can't wait to read more. ;D


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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #3 on: January 10, 2012, 03:02:44 PM »
Sorry about the loss of your legacy, but I'm excited for the start of this story!  ;D
The Fireheart Legacy
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If at first you don't succeed, call it version 1.0.

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #4 on: January 10, 2012, 03:26:34 PM »
Brilliant start, that was really great. I especially love the looks on the sims' faces - they really match what you're saying, it's brilliant! :)

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #5 on: January 10, 2012, 05:10:57 PM »
I'm sad to see the Tenderlove's legacy end but I'm excited to see more about Sammi! Great introduction :)
I'm pretty sad too. Thanks.
I'm glad you start a story with Sammi! Can't wait to read more. ;D
Thanks.
Sorry about the loss of your legacy, but I'm excited for the start of this story!  ;D
Thanks.
Brilliant start, that was really great. I especially love the looks on the sims' faces - they really match what you're saying, it's brilliant! :)
Thanks. I had a photo of the actual fire but it got deleted. It was benefitted the story that it was deleted.

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2012, 05:53:33 AM »
Chapter 2:A New Beginning
The trip to the Bay of Barnacles took many hours. Sammi was terribly boat sick through the whole experience and Ditz nearly fell off. We soon arrived at the Dock and a taxi drove us to our new house. It was beautiful.

I left Sammi at home with a babysitter. She was left locked in her room fast asleep. I know that these babysitters can’t be trusted.

Out in town, I applied for a job. We were already poor and I didn’t know how much longer we would cope. Thinking about it, I need to find out how to fix Gogo. He might know what happened back in Appaloosa Plains.

As the week continued, Ditz and I both went on adventures of our own. Ditz met this odd coloured dog.

And I found myself a wife. Her name is Maria Mage. I told her everything about the fire and all she could do is cry.

Don’t think Sammi has been forgotten. I’ve been working on her skills. She learnt how to talk!

Maria offered to learn some Handiness skills and fix the laptop while I rack in some simoleans. Let’s hope we can do it.

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2012, 11:07:04 AM »
They're back!
I'm glad they arrived at Barnacle Bay safe and sound. The house is pretty! Did you build it or was it already in BB?

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2012, 03:09:57 PM »
I'm glad the story is back on track!  ;D
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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2012, 03:13:19 PM »
Yey! Glad to see this up again, Gogo! :) The house is lovely!

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Re: Finding Out About the Fire
« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2012, 04:40:47 PM »
They're back!
I'm glad they arrived at Barnacle Bay safe and sound. The house is pretty! Did you build it or was it already in BB?
Thanks! I built it as a request but really wanted to use it. You can find it here
I'm glad the story is back on track!  ;D
Thanks.
Yey! Glad to see this up again, Gogo! :) The house is lovely!
Thanks.